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At last, here's the first part of the ninth chapter of the third Amy, JoBeth, Lauren & Tara story. This one took quite a while to get posted as I simply was not very happy with my writing in most of it. I took a few additional polishing passes at the start and end of the chapter, but it's still not in a shape that I'm fully happy with. A combination of being down and a few other writing-related frustrations weren't helping the matter and in the end, I think it's best to just post it now in it's imperfect state and try to move on to future successes, rather than continuing to go over this time and time again.

We do get to see a bit of cuteness between Amy & JoBeth, showing how they enjoy their kinkier sides both when alone and in a slightly more casual, "around the apartment" way. For the girls, bondage can be just a part of normal, everyday fun too. Beyond the more adult applications, the restriction and possession can be an extension of relaxation and affection without anything naughty being a part of it. It's something I try to show in a few of my commissions and hopefully I'll be able to more fully cover it in a short story or two, if I can ever banish this writer's block.

Also, we do have a little bit of playful teasing as we see what Lauren & Tara are up to. The full version of the chapter is posted on AFF, since it's not fully DA-safe, and hopefully people can enjoy the progress despite the long pause. Just two more (long) chapters to go, so there's much more fun to come!

Thanks to all for reading, hopefully most of you out there will like what you see here and look forward to what's next, where we get to some Lauren & Tara progress...

Enjoy! :)
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As I was reading through these I had a sudden thought that I'd seen pictures of these characters around DA. A quick search later, turns out there's a decent amount, including a few done by Root I really enjoyed. Also hadn't put it together that JoBeth was the JoBeth from Time Splitters. Congrats on giving me a day of revelations!